REALITY SOUNDBITES “IT’S MY OWN INVENTION”
by Keith Morrison
©2007 Keith Morrison

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   It was a brilliant idea, really. It struck you in the middle of the night, making you sit bolt upright at the pure genius of it, so striking, so original, that unlike so many things that your brain comes up with when you sleep you don’t forget it in the morning. That’s how breathtakingly awesome the idea was. You don’t even have to write it down to remember it: it sits there, in your brain, percolating and metastasizing into a monster of a great idea. My word, when you write it down publishers will be fighting each other to publish it! People will proclaim your greatness! They won’t bother to wait for the scheduled time to hand out the Pulitzers, the Nebulas, the Hugos, they’ll just give it to you right now because obviously nothing better will come along to match your work. Hell, they’re even thinking of making a special ruling that you can’t win them again next year because your story would clearly have no competition again, it’s just So. Damn. Good.
   Smiling to yourself at the magnitude of pure fictional magnificence you are about to unleash, you decide to chill a bit by reading a book. And then reading some more, the smile becoming a frown. You glance at the cover. No you’ve never read it before, never seen a discussion of it. The frown becomes a teeth-grinding grimace as you realize in abject horror that this writer asshole stole your idea by publishing it three years before you thought of it. Bastard!
   It happens to everyone who writes. I bring it up because it happened to me just the other day. I had a great idea, actually started writing out the character descriptions, thinking about the background, knowing that some things in it bore a resemblance to fiction that was already out there but I was prepared for it, already having a scene where characters lampshaded that what they were doing was like out of a TV show. Nothing too close, so I was okay. And after I’d spent a few days doing this, just before a business trip, I bought and downloaded some ebooks to read on the plane. I settled into my seat, turned on my PDA, and had the realization of horror that I described in the second paragraph. Damn you John Ringo, damn you to hell!
   The resemblances were uncanny: The MacGuffin of the setting caused by a particle research experiment gone awry. Members of the military who were science fiction fans being at a premium to deal with this. Travel to other worlds through gates caused by the accident.
   At first glance, were my outline next to Ringo’s, they’d look like near copies. On the other hand, the differences do start piling up fast once you get into the details, and once you got further into the fiction it would be quite clear that despite the surface similarities the two are different stories going in different directions. The initial coincidental details were just that, coincidental.
   Well, perhaps not entirely. Not based on my copying him (as I’d never heard of the novel before I browsed around and decided to try it), but more on convergent evolution. I needed gates to somewhere else, I needed for them not to be natural, and I needed for them (at least initially) not to be intentional. Okay, so they’re an accident. What kind of accident would do it? Something with particle physics, given the weirdness existing at that level of theory, would do nicely. I can’t speak for what Ringo was thinking, obviously, but I suspect it went along the same lines. In other words, we needed roughly the same thing and came to roughly the same rationale.
   The point of this is the old writers’ (and readers’, and reviewers’) rule: There are no new ideas. If you write it down, odds are someone else did it first somewhere else. Trying to be totally original is a fool’s game; it’s inevitable that someone will be able to point out similarities to an existing work that may be entirely coincidental—as in my example—or may have influenced you subconsciously. An example of the latter is Larry Niven having it pointed out to him that Ringworld is almost The Wizard of Oz in an SF setting.
   And you know what? There’s nothing wrong with that.
   It’s a tradition as old as writing. Noah’s Ark is a retelling of the older Sumerian legend of Utnapishtim from the Epic of Gilgamesh. The Roman gods were blatant carbon copies (with some smudging) of the Greeks, who themselves picked up stories of older gods and incorporated them into their own myths and legends. There’s a good possibility Christianity picked up aspects of the Mithras cult, aside from all the other bits and pieces that were adopted in, Islam incorporated older Arabic mythological elements, and so on and so forth.
   In modern times there are deliberate retellings of the same story, or stories obviously inspired by something else. Just off the top of my head (and these are only a very few examples):

Original Derivative
The Wizard of Oz Wicked, Tin Man
Yojimbo Last Man Standing, A Fistful of Dollars, Lucky Number Slevin
Seven Samurai The Magnificent Seven, Samurai 7, The Three Amigos, Battle Beyond the Stars, A Bug’s Life, etc and so on
King Lear Ran
Rashomon Too many TV episodes and movies to list
Dracula The Dracula Tapes, pick a vampire movie

   At this point I have to stop and point out the obvious fact of how influential Kurosawa has been. Not just in direct remakes and stories, but in plot elements. Seven Samurai, for instance, was one of the first films to have the “recruiting of heroes to deal with a problem” which as been a recurring element in not only the remakes and parodies of the film but in other films like Ocean’s 11 and every roleplaying game ever made.
   Then, of course, you get some of the other, perhaps less ‘homage to’ or ‘remake of’ than ‘outright copy with the serial numbers filed off’. Yes, I’m looking at you, Eragon, a.k.a. Star Wars with dragons and a Mary Sue protagonist’.
   The point I’m making is that just because it’s been done before doesn’t automatically make a new version illegitimate. Oh, sure, if you get too close to looking like you photocopied the original script and changed a few names people may point out the similarities and call you a hack (*cough*ChristopherPaolini*cough*), but that in itself doesn’t mean that your story is automatically bad.
   Like everything else, context is everything. Similarities don’t necessarily mean that it’s the same story. “A ragtag group of people fighting an evil government, in space” can cover everything from Star Wars to Battlestar Galactica to Blake’s 7 to Firefly.
   So don’t be afraid of writing and using an element that’s been used before (or having a similarity pointed out after the fact). Everyone does it. Everyone has done it, and everyone will do it.
   Of course, it still has to be good…
   Later!


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